Friday, August 7, 2009

well im trying my hand at an

Visual Novel

WOOOOOOO fun fun the only thing is that i have to get an team togher i still suck at drawing and need someone to overcheck my spelling for the story line

Thursday, October 9, 2008

King 2

in the early 18th century the family of MAIN MC was the most feared monster hunters in the world but at the end of the war when peaces was in s they fear that their descendants would be hunted down for their act of hate toward monsters, so they made a peace treaty that their first male born child of the 20th century would marry the four princess of the monster kings to their surprised the monster kings agree but with four condition 1 that they would be marry before the age of ten , 2 lived tother by the age of 20 , 3 by the age of 30 he would rule the monsters domain, 4 if he fail to do any of this the child would slave be the princess for the remainders of his life and the child of the next century will have to take his place. The year is now 2007 and the boy have now meet the princess again this is the story of that boy and how he became the King Of Monsters.

MAIN MC)”Yawn* Wow it has been a month sense school ended .................MAN I’M SO BORD “
Knock Knock Knock
Main MC)”Huh? Wonder who that is Maki is suppose to be with her grandparents until next week and MAIN MF left last week to see his mom.”
Main MC opens the door
MAIN MC “ Who is it.................hmmmmm “
WW&V)” HELLO MAIN MC-Kun’
Main MC “ Um hi “ MAIN MC step a few feet back” who are you”
WW “ Hi Im Gayneth”
V “ And Im Azzalene”
from behind Main MC back (W” HI Im Alarice”
Main MC jumped ” WAAAAAA WERE DID YOU CAME FROM AND HOW DID YOU GET IN MY HOUSE”
Alarice” I teleported in here”
Main MC “Wait What how can u teleport in here there no way”
Alarice” Yeah there is when your a witch”
MAIN MC” Ok okay get it I’m on one of those show were they get the guy real scare”
Gayneth)’ Huh what you mean”
MAIN MC moving all over the room”Wow you hid the cameras real good i can’t find them”
?” There are no cameras so stop acting so dumb”
MAIN MC” AHHHHHHHH ANTHER ONE”
Azzalene)” What do u mean but anther one”
MAIN MC” well ummm i ummm that not important what is that your in my house without my permission.”
?” Im Battousai by the way”
MAIN MC” huh”
Battousai) ” You didn’t ask that very rude”
MAIN MC” YOU ALL BROKE IN MY HOUSE AND YOU CALLING ME RUDE”
Azzalene” Hey I knock”
Gayneth) ” Yeah me too”
MAIN MC “ I never said to come in”
Gayneth& Azzalene “ YOU SOOO MEAN”
MAIN MC “ I give up*sigh* why are you here anyway.”
Alarice” Huh we’re your wives.”
MAIN MC “ What???????”*Main MC phone rings*”We’ll Talk about this in a min” MAIN MC answer the phone “ Hello, oh hi mom, yes I’m been okay , uh uh, uh huh, wait who was suppose to come here, WAIT WIVES, SO THEY TELLING THE TRUTH, BUT WHEN DID THIS HAPPEN I NEVER REMEMBERS DOING THIS it a what, why was i not told about this, I was when? THAT WAS TEN YEARS AGO I WAS EIGHT AND YOU KNOW I DON’T REMBER ANY THING FROM BACK THEN, what so it real happen and you actually did it legal there no way, what but there no way i can’t talk to girls i don’t know, what you mean i do know them , WAIT DON’T HANG UP, WAIT STOP” MAIN hangs up the phone”*sigh* would someone please tell me what is going on”

Battousai) ”Didn’t you read the first?it told you all of it. well then let me explain it you personally it start in the early 18th century with your family who was the most feared monster hunters in the world but when the war was coming to the end they fear that their descendants would be hunted down for their act of hate toward monsters as an act of revenge , so they made a peace treaty with the four monsters King Girirajanof the were-wolfs , Albern of the warlocks, Lionisio of the vampires, and Hiko of the _______ . The deal was that their first male born child of the 20th century would marry the four princess of the monster kings to their surprised the monster kings agree but with four condition 1 that they would be marry before the age of ten, 2 that they lived tother by the age of 20, 3 by the age of 30 he would rule the monsters domain ,and 4 if they fail to do any of this the child would slave be the princess for the remainders of his life and the child of the next century will have to take his place and so on and so forth .”
Main MC: Ummmm so I’m the boy then.”
Battousai)”Yes”
“ So if i don’t do that stuff I’m a slave to you four until i die”
Gayneth)”That pretty much it”
Main MC” Wow that sucks”
Azzalene” Don’t worry i won’t bite you ...... well much” Azzalene laugh to herself
Gayneth) ” Back off you leech his is mine”
Azzalene” WHAT YOU CALL ME AND HE MINE TOO”
WW’ RRRRRRRR”
V”RRRRRR”
MAIN MC“ Ok ok clam down you guys”
Gayneth & Azzalene “ BACK OFF THIS DOSEN ‘T INVOLE YOU”
MAIN MC “ I’M SORRY I’M SORRY “
Main MC runs off durning the fight between Gayneth & Azzalene
MAIN MC “ Oh boy this is some weird stuff i still can’t believe it is happening.
Battousai)” We’ve been looking for you”
MAIN MC “ AHHHHH “
Battousai)”why did you scream is it because im scary”
MAIN MC” well it not that it is when you come out of no were is when im scare”
Battousai) ” why is it that you use to love that”
MAIN MC” what do you mean i never met you before”
Battousai) ” That not true we all use to play when we were little ten years ago don’t you remember us”
MAIN MC thinking to himself” well if that the case i wouldn't remember it anyway”
Battousai)”Is something wrong”
MAIN MC “Oh sorry no lets go back and clear this mess up a little k. “

What will happen next what secrets uncover, maybe old friends come back, or even new friends arrive

Friday, September 19, 2008

my story

MAIN MC is the main charter can't think ouf a name

Main MC “The day was like any other the morning dew cooled the air a sweet scent was in the air showing joy to who ever smell it oh what a wonderful day it was but the peace was soon to be gone and it was about to get weird really really weird .”

(MAIN MC is walking down to school) “Man i really hate wakening up so dang early for school ....... oh well not much i can do well this is the last week at least.”
Maki) “MAIN MC-kun”
“ huh is that Maki-chan ”
Maki) “MAIN MC-kun”
“WOOOO SLOW DOWN”
Maki) “ HUH” trip over a rock” AHHHHH”
“ow that hurt Maki-chan you need to watch were you going and slow down it not very safe or lady like”
Maki) “Hum* Like u would know MAIN MC-kun you never talk with any girls ex me.

“ That don’t mean I don’t know what manners are and i just don’t want to talk to girls”
Maki)” Your really shy around girls aren’t you”
(Umm ... ummm What wait ummm”
Maki) “Well whatever did you get your homework done last night”
“Huh yeah why”
Maki) “Why i want to copy it of course”
“No”
Maki) “No?
“No”
awkward silence
Maki) “ BUT WHY!!”
“Because you always do this i won’t be here for u always u know you need to do stuff on your own”
Maki) “ that why i must take full advesent of it and beside....”
“Beside what....”
Maki) “ YOU OWE ME”
“Hun wait what i own you since when”
Maki) “ Everyday “
“what do you do for me”
Maki) “I walk to school with u everyday “
“HHHHUUUUUUUUUUHHHHHH”
Maki) “ There are a lot of guys who would love to be were u are”
“Really you think they would trade me places”
Maki) Oh shut up”
“Hahahahahahaha”
Maki) “THat not funny”
“IS for me “ bell rings” shoot we’re going to be late hurry up Maki-chan “
Maki) “HEY WAIT UP”
“COME ON MAKI -CHAN YOU GOONA BE LATE”
Maki)“ AHH OH NO”
“Ahhh made it that was a close one huh Maki-chan Maki-chan hhhmmm were you go”
Maki)” HEYYYYYYYYYYY MAIN MC -kun”
“AHHH THERE YOU ARE”
Maki)“ you so mean “
“what i do
Maki)”you just left me behind”
“you was just too slow”
Maki)” So you could have ran with me”
“And be late no thank you hehe”
Maki) “ill get you for this MAIN MC-kun”
“ AHHH don’t be so mean the teacher not even here so your safe too”
maki)”That beside the point you still left me
Teacher” Ok okay everyone get in your set time for class”


Lunch bell rings ( YES LUNCH TIME!!!!!!!)
MAIN MF(This is the only time you happy at school)
(...... maybe AHHHH melon bread all right.)
Maki)”sigh* you are so easily please.”
Main MF( Yes he is but that the way he always been that way”
( Huh You say something”
MAIN MF( uuum no nothing hahaha ummm well lets dig in”
after they got done eating
(Ok well it time to be heading back let go”
Maki)”Right behind you”
MAIN MF(K let go ............Hey Maki ”
Maki) What?”
MAIN MF “Did they finally gave up”
Maki)”I don’t know i guess”
( MAIN MC -KUN)
Maki & MAIN MF)” UN OH RUN”
(What are y’all yelling about.................................uh oh”
MAIN MC runs as a group of girls chase him
MAIN Mf)” So sad he is so shy around girls that he actually runs from them but they love him so they don’t want to give up right Mika”
Maki)” HAHAHAHAHA Sure you right that what you get for leaving me HAHAHAHAHA.
MAIN MF) “ Wow Mika your so mean”
Maki)”Did you say something”
MAIN MF “ Un no”
MAIN MC) “ COME ON GUYS HELP ME PLEASE”



Looking from a window in a dark room four girls talked
W“Hmmmmmmm so that MAIN MC huh”
?“yeah “
V“ Not too bad to look at is he”
WW“ You need to use some self-restrain okay”
V“ Yeah yeah i know”
V“ Well lets get him i hate been up this late”
W“It early for the rest of us though and what if he don’t want to go what then ”
WW“He don’t have much of a choose now does he well if he wants to live that is.”
W“I guess not”
V“ Come on let get this over with this I want to go to bed”
W“ yes sorry”
WW“OK OK hold your bats”
V “WHAT DID YOU SAY
?“Stop it and lets go”


Who are these people and what do they mean if he wants to live hell go find out on the next chapter

Friday, September 12, 2008

Rosario + Vampire

I love this manga it sooo fun but at the same time it has action like no other if only they make a movie with it >.< well they might soon so keep those fighters cross i give this manga a 4 of 5 stars

Friday, September 5, 2008

Gun x Sword

The story is set on the "Planet of Endless Illusion", a place where rogues of all sorts gather. The protagonist(hero), Van, travels the world searching for a man with a clawed right hand who killed his bride. He is joined by several other travelers along the way, each linked to the clawed man by a personal loss.

It was a great anime but i didn't like the ending too well i mean it was ok but it was ummm i don't know it just wasn't good to me i like a well detail ending but oh well i gave it a 3.5 out of 5 stars.

Thursday, September 4, 2008

Sub or Dub

well i must say i like sub more that dub most times but there is some time i must say that dub is better but it like 1 out of 8 times